TITLE BOX
In the title box, On HALLOWEEN, on a dark and stormy night, DAD is sitting in his chair reading.
NEXT PANEL, the doorbell rings.
NEXT ROW
INSIDE – FRONT ENTRANCE. DAD gets up and grabs a bowl of candy.
DAD goes t the front door and opens it-
RAYNE is standing there, dressed up as DAD COMING HOME FRMO WORK. RAYNE is holding a trick or treat bag.
DAD is staring at RAYNE.
DAD Sighs, RAYNE looks for constructive criticism.
DAD
Not cool.
RAYNE
Are my eyes dead enough?
RAYNE
Do they properly show how much I hate my job?