TITLE BOX In the title box, RAYNE gets off the camp bus, looking very unhappy. DAD What’s wrong? RAYNE I tried to do my deep end test at camp. RAYNE Had to tread water for 5 minutes. NEXT PANEL, RAYNE goes into the house. DAD So what happened? I’ve seen you tread water for longer than that. RAYNE I started to wonder if I could keep my head above water if I held my feet. NEXT ROW INSIDE – RAYNE’S ROOM. DAD comes to see RAYNE in his room. DAD You’ll try again tomorrow, and you’ll stay focused. RAYNE How? DAD smiles. DAD Rage. DAD explains. DAD Get angry, and obsess over it, simmer on it. DAD You’ll never even notice the time go by. RAYNE doesn’t think it’ll work. RAYNE There’s nothing that will- DAD Avocados. Cut to tomorrow, with 2 COUNSELORS watching a visibly angry RAYNE treading water, on the timer the COUNSELOR is holding, it says 51:33.